The perfume title will be too small to see what the shapes are the typography.
I tested with an white background rather with the red and used helevetica. I think the shapes of the bottles are more noticeable but I don't think it exactly works with an white background looks to boring.Might need other opinions.
Making the title larger makes more interesting but still looks a bit dull.
The red background emphasis the blood about the murderer. but not sure weather the authors name and a story of a murderer should be in helevetica or should be in the same typography as the title.
I prefer the title to be portrait rather than landscape as you can see the bottle shapes are.and that the helevetica makes it more professional and having the original typography 'Bambi' makes it a bit tacky.
Keep the title centred works but I don't it works having the authors name on the top right makes it a bit lost in layout.
Keep it on the right makes it more interesting to the eye but is there to much space on the left?
Moving the everything to right also makes it more interesting but is it easier to read from the left up or right up?
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