Sunrise sonnet

This is the idea I wanted to produce typography over photographs.

I first simply put typography that suited the subject. But I feel that it has lack of consideration.



I think the smaller typography works better as looking at the phtotgraph.
The sun reflections give's a great effect adding that early morning look.



The typography on the top of the sun works better, as the eye looks at the sonnet and then the sun.







Looks flat, I think the typography layout doesn't fit in with the image.