This is poster 1:
A3 size poster folded into A5. A message to the school pupils.
A strong message.
The question might just be way too small.
Poster 2:
Used another bright colour. Green orange seemed the most appropriate.
Again typography to small. Put i personally like the simpler white design typography. I think its just my style of me working as simple design. The salt pepper vinegar typography is too busy for me but it works for this poster though.