Fresh Start

Moving on from the last time Which in the crit did not go well with this brief it need to be fun for student to look at. So illustrative typography seem to be the right way about doing this brief.



Think the lighter dots with out the circles around each makes it look more realistic.





The black outlines makes it look too flat.



This is meant to look like it is splattered but look way too controlled.





Again this looks way to controlled and also the colour not right.



The salt need more dots.







These layouts don't look right at all. Needs to look more messy and the helevetica typography looks rubbish.